r127 - trunk/www.openmoko.com

sean at sita.openmoko.org sean at sita.openmoko.org
Sun Jul 15 09:31:09 CEST 2007


Author: sean
Date: 2007-07-15 09:30:59 +0200 (Sun, 15 Jul 2007)
New Revision: 127

Modified:
   trunk/www.openmoko.com/products-neo-advanced-03-hardware.html
   trunk/www.openmoko.com/products-neo-advanced-04-software.html
   trunk/www.openmoko.com/products-neo-base-03-hardware.html
   trunk/www.openmoko.com/products-neo-base-04-software.html
Log:
fixed more spelling and grammer issues.

Modified: trunk/www.openmoko.com/products-neo-advanced-03-hardware.html
===================================================================
--- trunk/www.openmoko.com/products-neo-advanced-03-hardware.html	2007-07-14 12:26:15 UTC (rev 126)
+++ trunk/www.openmoko.com/products-neo-advanced-03-hardware.html	2007-07-15 07:30:59 UTC (rev 127)
@@ -80,7 +80,7 @@
 
 <div class="main_container software_block hardware_block" id="tab_main_article_0">               
 		<div class="left_column">
-            <h3>The Neo 1973 runs totally Free Software. Even hardware-wise we're pushing things drastically further than most device manufacturers. The Neo was specifically designed with openess and ease of developer-access from very start.</h3>		</div>
+            <h3>The Neo 1973 runs totally Free Software. Even hardware-wise we're pushing things drastically further than most device manufacturers. The Neo was specifically designed with openness and ease of developer-access from very start.</h3>		</div>
 		
 		<div class="right_column">
         	<a href="uploaded_images/42.png" onclick="showLargeImage('uploaded_images/42.png',914,524); return false;"><img src="uploaded_images/40.png" width="374" height="179" alt="" /></a>		</div>
@@ -90,9 +90,9 @@
         <div class="collumn_view">
                 	<h4>A Smarter Phone</h4>
 
-	<p>On the hardware side we're pushing the Neo further than other device manufacturers. Designed with openess and developer-access from the start, Neo's hardware will invite your software imagination to take a spin.</p>
+	<p>On the hardware side we're pushing the Neo further than other device manufacturers. Designed with openness and developer-access from the start, Neo's hardware will invite your software imagination to take a spin.</p>
 
-	<p>We choose chips that have complete documentation publicly available, such as the ARM-based Samsung S3C2410 <span class="caps">SOC</span>. We added a debug port with complete access to <span class="caps">JTAG</span> and a serial console. Not content with that we went over the top and left "interesting" signals, such as the I2C bus, at easily solderable contact pads for the hardware hackers to have some fun.</p>
+	<p>We chose chips that have complete documentation publicly available, such as the ARM-based Samsung S3C2410 <span class="caps">SOC</span>. We added a debug port with complete access to <span class="caps">JTAG</span> and a serial console. Not content with that we went over the top and left "interesting" signals, such as the I2C bus, at easily solderable contact pads for the hardware hackers to have some fun.</p>
 
 	<h4>Connectivity</h4>
 
@@ -102,7 +102,7 @@
 
 	<p>You can extend the internal storage of 128 MB <span class="caps">RAM</span> and 64 MB <span class="caps">NAND</span> Flash with an SDIO-capable microSD card. As a bonus, we ship a 512 MB card with the phone.</p>
 
-	<h4>Openess</h4>
+	<h4>Openness</h4>
 
 	<p>Like Make Magazine we believe "If you can't open it, you don't own it".<br />
 Others try their best to lock us out of the devices we buy, but, Neo's are built for you to open. You can take the casing apart and get at the <span class="caps">PCB</span>. Opt for the Neo Advanced kit and we'll give you a special screwdriver (the Neo cracker) and plastic guitar pick to make opening this device even easier. Go ahead, open your Neo. Make our day.</p>        </div>

Modified: trunk/www.openmoko.com/products-neo-advanced-04-software.html
===================================================================
--- trunk/www.openmoko.com/products-neo-advanced-04-software.html	2007-07-14 12:26:15 UTC (rev 126)
+++ trunk/www.openmoko.com/products-neo-advanced-04-software.html	2007-07-15 07:30:59 UTC (rev 127)
@@ -80,16 +80,17 @@
 
 	<div class="main_container software_block" id="tab_main_article_0">
       <div class="left_column">
-        <h3>End user Freedom is our passion. The entire OpenMoko system and application software are build using Free and Open Source Software (FOSS).</h3>
+        <h3>End user Freedom is our passion. The entire OpenMoko system and application software are built using Free and Open Source Software (FOSS).</h3>
         <a href="uploaded_images/41.png" onclick="showLargeImage('uploaded_images/41.png',948,622); return false;"><img src="uploaded_images/39.png" width="410" height="269" alt="" /></a> </div>
 	  <div class="right_column">
         <h4>Mobile FOSS</h4>
 	    <p>On the system side, OpenMoko uses software with a tireless history of success and stability, such as the Linux kernel, the <span class="caps">GNU</span> C library, the X window system, and the GTK+ toolkit, to name only a few.<br />
 	      OpenMoko is Mobile <span class="caps">FOSS</span>.</p>
-	    <p>New technology requires new code. As we implement extensions, such as device drivers, or create something entirely new, such as the OpenMoko <span class="caps">GUI</span> framework and our collection of smartphone applications, the code is available though <span class="caps">SVN</span>, or, even better, has already been merged into the upstream sources.</p>
+	<p>New technology requires new code. As we implement extensions, such as device drivers, or create something entirely new, the code is available though <span class="caps">SVN</span>. Ideally, it has already been merged into the upstream sources.</p>
+	
 	    <p>All this power is neatly bundled into the OpenMoko distribution which is based on OpenEmbedded, a meta-distribution containing more than 1,500 packages.</p>
 	    <h4>Open Standards</h4>
-	    <p>Well-known FOSS-based infrastructure and standards-based development tools enables developers to quickly make the Neo do exactly what they want. Whether this means just making a small personalization, porting an existing application, or even writing a new application from scratch, end users are in total control. The way things should be. And since OpenMoko is Mobile <span class="caps">FOSS</span>, developers can share the fruits of their work with the rest of the community.</p>
+	    <p>Well-known FOSS-based infrastructure and standards-based development tools enables developers to quickly make the Neo do exactly what they want. Whether this means just making a small personalization, porting an existing application, or even writing a new application from scratch, end users are in total control. The way things should be. And because OpenMoko is Mobile <span class="caps">FOSS</span>, developers can share the fruits of their work with the rest of the community.</p>
 	    <p>For the mobile world this is an entirely new concept. But <span class="caps">FOSS</span> is not new. It’s already tried and tested in the server world. <span class="caps">FOSS</span> is what powers the Internet. OpenMoko is just taking things mobile. But for developers unaccustomed to the world of Free Software, OpenMoko is the place to start. Excellent community resources are available to help with the learning process. And since OpenMoko runs libraries and components commonly found on the Desktop, the knowledge gained can be applied to the entire <span class="caps">FOSS</span> domain.</p>
 	    <blockquote>
           <p>(*) <span class="caps">GPS</span> position calculation and, also for regulatory reasons, firmware contained in peripheral chips are the only exceptions. Those components communicate with the rest of the system through openly specified interfaces, e.g., <span class="caps">NMEA</span>, <span class="caps">GSM</span> 07.05, etc.</p>

Modified: trunk/www.openmoko.com/products-neo-base-03-hardware.html
===================================================================
--- trunk/www.openmoko.com/products-neo-base-03-hardware.html	2007-07-14 12:26:15 UTC (rev 126)
+++ trunk/www.openmoko.com/products-neo-base-03-hardware.html	2007-07-15 07:30:59 UTC (rev 127)
@@ -101,7 +101,7 @@
 
 	<div class="main_container software_block hardware_block" id="tab_main_article_0">               
 		<div class="left_column">
-            <h3>The Neo 1973 runs totally Free Software. Even hardware-wise we're pushing things drastically further than most device manufacturers. The Neo was specifically designed with openess and ease of developer-access from very start.</h3>		</div>
+            <h3>The Neo 1973 runs totally Free Software. Even hardware-wise we're pushing things drastically further than most device manufacturers. The Neo was specifically designed with openness and ease of developer-access from very start.</h3>		</div>
 		
 		<div class="right_column">
         	<a href="uploaded_images/42.png" onclick="showLargeImage('uploaded_images/42.png',914,524); return false;"><img src="uploaded_images/40.png" width="374" height="179" alt="" /></a>		</div>
@@ -111,9 +111,9 @@
         <div class="collumn_view">
                 	<h4>A Smarter Phone</h4>
 
-	<p>On the hardware side we're pushing the Neo further than other device manufacturers. Designed with openess and developer-access from the start, Neo's hardware will invite your software imagination to take a spin.</p>
+	<p>On the hardware side we're pushing the Neo further than other device manufacturers. Designed with openness and developer-access from the start, Neo's hardware will invite your software imagination to take a spin.</p>
 
-	<p>We choose chips that have complete documentation publicly available, such as the ARM-based Samsung S3C2410 <span class="caps">SOC</span>. We added a debug port with complete access to <span class="caps">JTAG</span> and a serial console. Not content with that we went over the top and left "interesting" signals, such as the I2C bus, at easily solderable contact pads for the hardware hackers to have some fun.</p>
+	<p>We chose chips that have complete documentation publicly available, such as the ARM-based Samsung S3C2410 <span class="caps">SOC</span>. We added a debug port with complete access to <span class="caps">JTAG</span> and a serial console. Not content with that we went over the top and left "interesting" signals, such as the I2C bus, at easily solderable contact pads for the hardware hackers to have some fun.</p>
 
 	<h4>Connectivity</h4>
 
@@ -123,7 +123,7 @@
 
 	<p>You can extend the internal storage of 128 MB <span class="caps">RAM</span> and 64 MB <span class="caps">NAND</span> Flash with an SDIO-capable microSD card. As a bonus, we ship a 512 MB card with the phone.</p>
 
-	<h4>Openess</h4>
+	<h4>Openness</h4>
 
 	<p>Like Make Magazine we believe "If you can't open it, you don't own it".<br />
 Others try their best to lock us out of the devices we buy, but, Neo's are built for you to open. You can take the casing apart and get at the <span class="caps">PCB</span>. Opt for the Neo Advanced kit and we'll give you a special screwdriver (the Neo cracker) and plastic guitar pick to make opening this device even easier. Go ahead, open your Neo. Make our day.</p>        </div>

Modified: trunk/www.openmoko.com/products-neo-base-04-software.html
===================================================================
--- trunk/www.openmoko.com/products-neo-base-04-software.html	2007-07-14 12:26:15 UTC (rev 126)
+++ trunk/www.openmoko.com/products-neo-base-04-software.html	2007-07-15 07:30:59 UTC (rev 127)
@@ -101,7 +101,7 @@
 
 	<div class="main_container software_block" id="tab_main_article_0">               
 		<div class="left_column">
-            <h3>End user Freedom is our passion. The entire OpenMoko system and application software are build using Free and Open Source Software (FOSS).</h3><a href="uploaded_images/41.png" onclick="showLargeImage('uploaded_images/41.png',948,622); return false;"><img src="uploaded_images/39.png" width="410" height="269" alt="" /></a>		</div>
+            <h3>End user Freedom is our passion. The entire OpenMoko system and application software are built using Free and Open Source Software (FOSS).</h3><a href="uploaded_images/41.png" onclick="showLargeImage('uploaded_images/41.png',948,622); return false;"><img src="uploaded_images/39.png" width="410" height="269" alt="" /></a>		</div>
 		
 		<div class="right_column">
         
@@ -109,12 +109,12 @@
                 	<p>On the system side, OpenMoko uses software with a tireless history of success and stability, such as the Linux kernel, the <span class="caps">GNU</span> C library, the X window system, and the GTK+ toolkit, to name only a few.<br />
 OpenMoko is Mobile <span class="caps">FOSS</span>.</p>
 
-	<p>New technology requires new code. As we implement extensions, such as device drivers, or create something entirely new, such as the OpenMoko <span class="caps">GUI</span> framework and our collection of smartphone applications, the code is available though <span class="caps">SVN</span>, or, even better, has already been merged into the upstream sources.</p>
+	<p>New technology requires new code. As we implement extensions, such as device drivers, or create something entirely new, the code is available though <span class="caps">SVN</span>. Ideally, it has already been merged into the upstream sources.</p>
 
 	<p>All this power is neatly bundled into the OpenMoko distribution which is based on OpenEmbedded, a meta-distribution containing more than 1,500 packages.</p>
 
 	<h4>Open Standards</h4>
-	<p>Well-known FOSS-based infrastructure and standards-based development tools enables developers to quickly make the Neo do exactly what they want. Whether this means just making a small personalization, porting an existing application, or even writing a new application from scratch, end users are in total control. The way things should be. And since OpenMoko is Mobile <span class="caps">FOSS</span>, developers can share the fruits of their work with the rest of the community.</p>
+	<p>Well-known FOSS-based infrastructure and standards-based development tools enables developers to quickly make the Neo do exactly what they want. Whether this means just making a small personalization, porting an existing application, or even writing a new application from scratch, end users are in total control. The way things should be. And because OpenMoko is Mobile <span class="caps">FOSS</span>, developers can share the fruits of their work with the rest of the community.</p>
 
 	<p>For the mobile world this is an entirely new concept. But <span class="caps">FOSS</span> is not new. It’s already tried and tested in the server world. <span class="caps">FOSS</span> is what powers the Internet. OpenMoko is just taking things mobile. But for developers unaccustomed to the world of Free Software, OpenMoko is the place to start. Excellent community resources are available to help with the learning process. And since OpenMoko runs libraries and components commonly found on the Desktop, the knowledge gained can be applied to the entire <span class="caps">FOSS</span> domain.</p>
 





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