letter of recomendation

[Yogiz]

Seems like a nice recommendation letter, just a couple of observations:

1) Letter of recommendation is an official document and thus contracted
forms are not advisable. "what's" => "what is"
2) Isn't two-week trip supposed to be without the dash?
3) "Sincerely" and your contacts should be aligned to left as all the
rest of the text.

Other then that it looks fine. I might be mistaken about the second
point, English is not my first language.

Best of luck to you for your next writing task and I can assure you
that we all hope that Jodie will get the job! I hope we can read your
next piece of writing soon.

Thanks and regards,
Yogiz

On Wed, 22 Apr 2009 17:42:39 -0800
Ben Hussey <brettjamin at frumppyoldwoman.com> wrote:

> Jodie,
> Here is the letter; let me know if you need any changes.  I'll print
> a copy out to sign and have you send out, see you at home!
> -Ben