r109 - trunk/www.openmoko.com

[sean at sita.openmoko.org]

Author: sean
Date: 2007-07-08 21:44:48 +0200 (Sun, 08 Jul 2007)
New Revision: 109

Modified:
   trunk/www.openmoko.com/products-neo-advanced-00-develkit.html
   trunk/www.openmoko.com/products-neo-base-00-stdkit.html
Log:
fixed spelling / grammar errors

Modified: trunk/www.openmoko.com/products-neo-advanced-00-develkit.html
===================================================================
--- trunk/www.openmoko.com/products-neo-advanced-00-develkit.html	2007-07-08 19:12:26 UTC (rev 108)
+++ trunk/www.openmoko.com/products-neo-advanced-00-develkit.html	2007-07-08 19:44:48 UTC (rev 109)
@@ -138,14 +138,14 @@
 					<h2>Stylus</h2>
 				</div>
 				<img src="uploaded_images/24.png" width="248" height="209" alt="" />
-				<p>Forget those whimpy skinny stylus found in non-freed phones. The Neo’s stylus is what you’d expect for a phone this powerful. Featuring a four in one design, you’ll have everything you need in one place: Stylus, Pen, Laser pointer, and a flash light. We even through in extra batteries.</p>
+				<p>Forget those whimpy skinny stylus found in non-freed phones. The Neo’s stylus is what you’d expect for a phone this powerful. Featuring a four in one design, you’ll have everything you need in one place: Stylus, Pen, Laser pointer, and a flash light. We even threw in extra batteries.</p>
 			</div>
 			<div class="content tab_item" id="tab_devel_kit_article_5">
 				<div class="title_container">
 					<h2>Lanyard</h2>
 				</div>
 				<img src="uploaded_images/58.png" width="224" height="242" alt="" />
-	<p>In case you're wondering what that hole in the base of the Neo is for, now you know. This is a high-quality lanyard will safely hold your Neo so you're free to move. </p>
+	<p>In case you're wondering what that hole in the base of the Neo is for, now you know. This high-quality lanyard will safely hold your Neo so you're free to move. </p>
 			</div>
 			<div class="content tab_item" id="tab_devel_kit_article_6">
 				<div class="title_container">
@@ -168,7 +168,7 @@
 				</div>
 				<img src="uploaded_images/debugboard.png" width="320" height="189" alt="" />
 				
-				<p>The Debugboard provides a debug port with complete access to JTAG and a serial console as well 2 additional 
+				<p>The Debugboard provides a debug port with complete access to JTAG and a serial console as well as 2 additional 
 				USB-A ports via an internal USB hub.</p>
 				<p>Either connect it to the Neo via the Flex Cable or use the pinheaders with your favorite ARM project (yes we're even open for other's, too.</p>
 			</div>

Modified: trunk/www.openmoko.com/products-neo-base-00-stdkit.html
===================================================================
--- trunk/www.openmoko.com/products-neo-base-00-stdkit.html	2007-07-08 19:12:26 UTC (rev 108)
+++ trunk/www.openmoko.com/products-neo-base-00-stdkit.html	2007-07-08 19:44:48 UTC (rev 109)
@@ -157,14 +157,14 @@
 					<h2>Stylus</h2>
 				</div>
 				<img src="uploaded_images/24.png" width="248" height="209" alt="" />
-				<p>Forget those whimpy skinny stylus found in non-freed phones. The Neo’s stylus is what you’d expect for a phone this powerful. Featuring a four in one design, you’ll have everything you need in one place: Stylus, Pen, Laser pointer, and a flash light. We even through in extra batteries.</p>
+				<p>Forget those whimpy skinny stylus found in non-freed phones. The Neo’s stylus is what you’d expect for a phone this powerful. Featuring a four in one design, you’ll have everything you need in one place: Stylus, Pen, Laser pointer, and a flash light. We even threw in extra batteries.</p>
 			</div>
 			<div class="content tab_item" id="tab_standard_kit_article_5">
 				<div class="title_container">
 					<h2>Lanyard</h2>
 				</div>
 				<img src="uploaded_images/58.png" width="224" height="242" alt="" />
-	<p>In case you're wondering what that hole in the base of the Neo is for, now you know. This is a high-quality lanyard will safely hold your Neo so you're free to move. </p>
+	<p>In case you're wondering what that hole in the base of the Neo is for, now you know. This high-quality lanyard will safely hold your Neo so you're free to move. </p>
 			</div>
 			<div class="content tab_item" id="tab_standard_kit_article_6">
 				<div class="title_container">