r112 - trunk/www.openmoko.com

sean at sita.openmoko.org sean at sita.openmoko.org
Wed Jul 11 17:20:53 CEST 2007


Author: sean
Date: 2007-07-11 17:20:41 +0200 (Wed, 11 Jul 2007)
New Revision: 112

Modified:
   trunk/www.openmoko.com/about-02-roadmap.html
   trunk/www.openmoko.com/products-index.html
   trunk/www.openmoko.com/products-neo-advanced-00-develkit.html
   trunk/www.openmoko.com/products-neo-base-00-stdkit.html
Log:
fixed spelling and grammar issues.

Modified: trunk/www.openmoko.com/about-02-roadmap.html
===================================================================
--- trunk/www.openmoko.com/about-02-roadmap.html	2007-07-09 03:20:18 UTC (rev 111)
+++ trunk/www.openmoko.com/about-02-roadmap.html	2007-07-11 15:20:41 UTC (rev 112)
@@ -63,24 +63,24 @@
 
 		<div class="content page_content" id="site_content">			
 <h2>Roadmap</h2>
-	<p>Our company is unconventional, we openly share our roadmap. And your participation, in terms of actual code, hardware features, suggestions, and usage-scenarios will shape product features of our future devices.</p>
+	<p>Our company is unconventional: we openly share our roadmap. And your participation, in terms of actual code, hardware features, suggestions, and usage-scenarios will shape product features of our future devices.</p>
 
 	<p>Each product we build follows a three-phase development model that repeats annually:</p>
 
 	<blockquote>
 	  <p><b>Phase 0: Developers Preview</b><br/>
-	    We will give away free phones to selected members of the developer community. At this point, the full source code to the product will become publicly available. We are committed to cooperating with the community in the interest of making the official developer launch a smooth experience. Also, at this time, all the community websites will be updated with content from the new device.</p>
+	    We will give away free phones to selected members of the developer community. At this point, the full source code to the product will become publicly available. We are committed to cooperating with the community in the interest of making the official developer launch a smooth experience. Also, at this time, all the community websites will be updated with content for the new device.</p>
 	  <p><strong>Phase 1: Official Developer Launch</strong><br />
 	    We will sell the Neo device direct from openmoko.com. Sales and orders will be worldwide. We are specifically targeting open source community developers.</p>
-	  <p><strong>Phase 2: Mass Market Sale</strong>
+	  <p><strong>Phase 2: Mass Market Sales</strong>
 	      <br />
-	    Online sales will continue. We will also be available in a retail stores and selected carriers around the world. At this point, we hope your mom and dad will want to buy a Neo, too. The next generation OpenMoko device will also be introduced at this time.	</p>
+	    Online sales will continue. We will also be available in retail stores and selected carriers around the world. At this point, we hope your mom and dad will want to buy a Neo, too. The next generation OpenMoko device will also be introduced at this time.	</p>
 	</blockquote>
-	<p>We want your involvement in OpenMoko. Now is a great time for us to work together. You&#8217;ll have our full support. We&#8217;re dedicated to helping you &#8220;Free Your Phone.&#8221; And we&#8217;re always looking, listening, and hungry for new things.  It is our goal to be totally market driven.</p>
+	<p>We want your involvement in OpenMoko. Now is a great time for us to work together. You&#8217;ll have our full support. We&#8217;re dedicated to helping you &#8220;Free Your Phone.&#8221; And we&#8217;re always looking, listening, and hungry for new things.  It is our goal to be totally market-driven.</p>
 
 	<p>To be market-driven requires a willingness to experiment. OpenMoko will provide discounted phones to people in &#8220;improbable&#8221; markets. We&#8217;re interested in what people in these markets can do with our products, whether they can use them at all, or what it would have to be like for them to become customers.</p>
 
-	<p>We will start out with the assumption that our product may find customers in previously ignored markets; that uses no one imagined when the product was designed will be found; Neo devices will be bought by customers outside our field of vision and even unknown to our sales force.</p>
+	<p>We will start out with the assumption that our product may find customers in previously ignored markets; that uses no one imagined when the product was designed will be found. Neo devices will be bought by customers outside our field of vision and even unknown to our sales force.</p>
 
 	<p>We need you to talk to us. Tell us what you want. We promise we will listen. Your feedback will help evolve our roadmap.</p>
 

Modified: trunk/www.openmoko.com/products-index.html
===================================================================
--- trunk/www.openmoko.com/products-index.html	2007-07-09 03:20:18 UTC (rev 111)
+++ trunk/www.openmoko.com/products-index.html	2007-07-11 15:20:41 UTC (rev 112)
@@ -66,7 +66,7 @@
 			</div>
 			<div class="article_description">
 				<h2><a href="products-neo-advanced-00-develkit.html">Neo Advanced</a></h2>
-				<div class="description">The Neo Advanced Kit everything the mobile device hacker wants to get down and dirty with the first freed phone, the Neo 1973.</div>
+				<div class="description">The Neo Advanced Kit contains everything the mobile device hacker wants to get down and dirty with the first freed phone, the Neo 1973.</div>
 			</div>
 		</div>
 	</div>

Modified: trunk/www.openmoko.com/products-neo-advanced-00-develkit.html
===================================================================
--- trunk/www.openmoko.com/products-neo-advanced-00-develkit.html	2007-07-09 03:20:18 UTC (rev 111)
+++ trunk/www.openmoko.com/products-neo-advanced-00-develkit.html	2007-07-11 15:20:41 UTC (rev 112)
@@ -102,7 +102,7 @@
 				<ul>
 					<li> 2.8" <span class="caps">VGA</span> <span class="caps">TFT</span> color display</li>
 					<li> Touchscreen, usable with stylus or fingers</li>
-					<li> 266HZ Samsung System on a Chip (<span class="caps">SOC</span>)</li>
+					<li> 266MHz Samsung System on a Chip (<span class="caps">SOC</span>)</li>
 					<li> <span class="caps">USB</span> 1.1, switchable between Client and Host (unpowered)</li>
 					<li> <span class="caps">Integrated AGPS</span></li>
 					<li> 2.5G <span class="caps">GSM</span> &#8211; quad band, voice, CSD, GPRS</li>

Modified: trunk/www.openmoko.com/products-neo-base-00-stdkit.html
===================================================================
--- trunk/www.openmoko.com/products-neo-base-00-stdkit.html	2007-07-09 03:20:18 UTC (rev 111)
+++ trunk/www.openmoko.com/products-neo-base-00-stdkit.html	2007-07-11 15:20:41 UTC (rev 112)
@@ -122,7 +122,7 @@
 				<ul>
 					<li> 2.8" <span class="caps">VGA</span> <span class="caps">TFT</span> color display</li>
 					<li> Touchscreen, usable with stylus or fingers</li>
-					<li> 266HZ Samsung System on a Chip (<span class="caps">SOC</span>)</li>
+					<li> 266MHz Samsung System on a Chip (<span class="caps">SOC</span>)</li>
 					<li> <span class="caps">USB</span> 1.1, switchable between Client and Host (unpowered)</li>
 					<li> <span class="caps">Integrated AGPS</span></li>
 					<li> 2.5G <span class="caps">GSM</span> &#8211; quad band, voice, CSD, GPRS</li>





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