letter of recomendation

Ben Hussey brettjamin at frumppyoldwoman.com
Fri Apr 24 04:03:00 CEST 2009


Yogiz wrote:
> Seems like a nice recommendation letter, just a couple of observations:
> 
> 1) Letter of recommendation is an official document and thus contracted
> forms are not advisable. "what's" => "what is"
> 2) Isn't two-week trip supposed to be without the dash?
> 3) "Sincerely" and your contacts should be aligned to left as all the
> rest of the text.
> 
> Other then that it looks fine. I might be mistaken about the second
> point, English is not my first language.
> 
> Best of luck to you for your next writing task and I can assure you
> that we all hope that Jodie will get the job! I hope we can read your
> next piece of writing soon.
> 
> Thanks and regards,
> Yogiz
> 
> On Wed, 22 Apr 2009 17:42:39 -0800
> Ben Hussey <brettjamin at frumppyoldwoman.com> wrote:
> 
>> Jodie,
>> Here is the letter; let me know if you need any changes.  I'll print
>> a copy out to sign and have you send out, see you at home!
>> -Ben
Oh man, this is really awkward.  ...Yet somehow awesome; I have new hope 
for the openmoko community.

-Ben

P.S. Thanks for all the proof reading, your pointers are appreciated.





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